I agree - for an audit, state the section that the non-conformance applies, and the objective evidence found. List facts, not opinion. There is no reason to state blame or cause in an audit finding.
Now, when it comes to the corrective action, that is a whole other issue.
Bob, this leads in perfectly with a short story I was going to share from yesterday.
While reviewing some calibration forms, I noticed two of them did not have calibration procedures listed on them. I called in the two individuals that completed the records. Simply, I told them to fix it.
So, if an internal auditor had found that, I would expect she/he to write up something like:
On XXX form dated 12/34/5678, the Procedure Used field was left blank.
They could then cite our section on Good Documentation Practices that spaces are not to be left blank. Ok, so exactly to your point, the report is turned in, and that part is done.
Now... the auditee would move to act upon it.
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So obviously I had a small, short, informal, but effective
training session
with the two. Problem #2-they should have never submitted those forms without it being complete. But one of the gentlemen correctly stated "Yea, I messed up. But we have a problem in our process, that there was not a procedure entered when it was put into the system".
Problem #1-why was the procedure not entered when the instrument was entered.
In the end, our process was working, because the reviewer caught these omissions prior to the completion of the activities. But, we still need to address the deficiencies to address making sure that does not happen anymore (addressing #1 and #2).
Bottom Line for the internal audit: We would much, much rather have the internal auditor find these non-conformances than an external auditor/ customer.