Hmmm...
2 things come to mind :
Point 1
- is your objective literally "be able to meet customer orders" or is there more to it ? because it doesnt seem very S.M.A.R.T to me
espescially given all the problems you are describing .
How is this objective measured ? what is the exact KPI ? what is the target ? what is the time frame ? how was this objective set (based on what ??)
looks to me like you are trying to reach the moon before having built a rocket
why dont you go at it step by step ...
like for example : be able to meet 40%,50%,60% (whatever) of customer orders on time .. and improve from there ?
Point 2 :
None of the above measures are corrective actions (except maybe point 6 ,if root cause was a training problem)
but the first 5 measures are corrections , not corrective actions
did you try to find the root cause of why "We have not been able to keep our equipment running, therefore our downtime objective has been shot to heck and back. We have been down 30% of the month to date" ???
by finding out the root cause of your equipment failure and FIXING that root cause you will have implemented a corrective action and prevented downtime from re-occuring .
If you just are Hiring moreemployees and making them work overtime it will not fix things by itself im afraid
you need to implement more corrective actions iMHO .