Esthyl,
OK, thanks - now I see. (A couple of examples are worth it!!) Yes, your suggested rewrite is pretty much as Randy is suggesting, I think.
My own suggestion would be that you do put ISO 9001 in somewhere (after all, you need a commitment to it), eg:
XYZ company is committed to a quality system that meets all relevant requirements including those of ISO 9001.
I say 'all relevant ...including' because you may have other internal requirements or there may be relevant legislation/regulations, etc etc. in your field. Don't use the year, you can just say 'ISO 9001' because then it's to the current one.
Then after that, I would simply refer to 'relevant requirements', you
don't need to keep repeating 'ISO 9001' because you've
already committed to that.
Randy is right in one way BUT not even mentioning 9001 would/might/could get some less enlightened auditors a bit twitchy, so I'd definitely do it
once, where you make the commitment (eg, as in your first example below).
MR shall establish, implement and maintain the quality system in accordance with the requirements of the ISO 9001:2000 standard.
My understanding with Randy's suggestion:
MR shall establish, implement and maintain the quality system in accordance with the requirements.
Yes... but I prefer your original one because it's clearer. 'the requirements' is a bit vague.
If it were me, I'd make it even shorter (drop 'establish' because presumably you've already
done that). And I don't care for 'shalls' - but that's up to you.
MR implements and maintains a quality system that meets the requirements of ISO 9001.
The Management Team, together with the ISO Committee, shall review the quality management system to ensure its continuing suitability and effectiveness and that all aspects of the quality requirements in ISO 9001:2000 Standard are fully satisfied.
My understanding with Randy's suggestion:
The Management Team, together with the ISO Committee, shall review the quality management system to ensure its continuing suitability and effectiveness and that all aspects of the quality requirements are fully satisfied.
I'd write this something like so:
The Management Team and ISO Committee review the quality management system to ensure its continuing suitability and effectiveness and that all relevant requirements are fully satisfied.