A couple of things I noticed - as Gman pointed out, section 6 is a duplicate of section 5.
Section 7.1 calls for a review of controlled forms annually, but 7.5 and 7.6 call for a review of work instructions and drawings on an 'as-needed' basis. These should (IMHO) be included in the annual review as well, since they are controlled documents as well.
Without knowing the size of your company, I would recommend that you 'spread the responsibility' for documents a little bit. Right now you have the QA manager responsible for everything - let the various department heads take responsibility for their own documentation (especially reviews), with QA acting as the gatekeeper.