Hello!
Since you asked... here are some comments:
In general, you would be safe making titles of the X/Y graphs. So:
would be a simple and accurate title.
As far as the summary, I cannot even begin to touch that one. Now, I am not being critical, so please don't take it that way. But opening up your presentation, all it appeared to me was a whole bunch of number placed into bar charts. That's perfectly fine, if you are building a case. How do the charts relate to one another? What point are they trying to make? If you don't tie them together, each viewer will make their own summary from the data. Make sense?
For example, I leave with the impression that there are a lot of french fries sold. Marc may have another, Jim another, you another, etc. You don't want that in a presentation.
The beginning of the presentation should have more introductory material. I might even lose a couple of the slides, unless they are really relevant.
Who is watching this presentation, and why? The presentation should be geared towards the audience. My impression of the presentation as-is: a group of marketing professionals interested in an in-depth numerical analysis of potatoes in restaurants.
Finally, the colors are very nice, and generally well-labeled. Make sure the final presentation equipment will use similar versions of Power Point. Also, while colors may look clear on a computer screen, make sure they show up well on the big screen for the presentation.
I hope that was some help
Since you asked... here are some comments:
In general, you would be safe making titles of the X/Y graphs. So:
Figure 5- Five year overview of potato consumption
As far as the summary, I cannot even begin to touch that one. Now, I am not being critical, so please don't take it that way. But opening up your presentation, all it appeared to me was a whole bunch of number placed into bar charts. That's perfectly fine, if you are building a case. How do the charts relate to one another? What point are they trying to make? If you don't tie them together, each viewer will make their own summary from the data. Make sense?
For example, I leave with the impression that there are a lot of french fries sold. Marc may have another, Jim another, you another, etc. You don't want that in a presentation.
The beginning of the presentation should have more introductory material. I might even lose a couple of the slides, unless they are really relevant.
Who is watching this presentation, and why? The presentation should be geared towards the audience. My impression of the presentation as-is: a group of marketing professionals interested in an in-depth numerical analysis of potatoes in restaurants.
Finally, the colors are very nice, and generally well-labeled. Make sure the final presentation equipment will use similar versions of Power Point. Also, while colors may look clear on a computer screen, make sure they show up well on the big screen for the presentation.
I hope that was some help