Yes, the objectives seem more taut and measurable than before. However, I am still not convinced with the QA objective of
'maintaining the system'. How will you measure that? Objectives need be measurable.
Also, most of these are objectives (some already targets). If you give targets for each objective (probably using the summary sheet I attached in my first post) along with action plans, you will be able to better control them and even achieve them systematically.
Ciao.
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Sincerely, SAM
"To achieve the impossible, it is precisely the unthinkable that must be thought!"