This is a very timely thread for me.
We are a manufacturing company with 5 employees.
I have been reviewing our ISO 9001 document and I have to say that I am disappointed. I expected this to be a document that we could use to communicate the company's quality vision with the information needed to implement it.
Instead I have found a document written in bureaucratize. I looked at a few paragraphs at random. On the third page I looked at, I found a paragraph with 45 words and 101 syllables in the first two sentences.
Am I the only one who thinks that trying to use this type of document in a production environment is madness. I can barely understand it and I deal with dense documents all the time. I suspect that for some of our valuable employees, it might as well be written in Latin.
So.... How aggressively can I wield the editors marker? I would like to cut this down to the six required clauses, the detailed work instructions, and clear instructions on how to comply with our quality and test expectations.
Do we really need paragraphs like this in the document?
"8.5.1 Continual improvement
8.5.1.1 XXXXX continually improves the effectiveness of the quality management system through the use of the quality policy, quality objectives, audit results, analysis of data, corrective and preventive actions and management review.
8.5.1.2 Internal audit results and quality performance data are analyzed by management review to assess the effectiveness of the quality system and current organizational performance. Opportunities and priorities for improvement are identified by comparing present quality performance to goals and aspirations defined in the quality policy. This process is defined in Operational Procedure QOP-56-01 Management Review.
8.5.1.3 Improvement projects are defined either as corrective and preventive actions or as quality objectives. These processes are defined in Operational Procedures QOP-85-03 Corrective and Preventive Actions, and QOP-56-01 Management Review, respectively."
Would we still be compliant if we were to substitute something more along the lines of this:
"Our goal is to produce quality products and back them with the customer service that people want. In addition, we want those products, and that service to get better.
In order to do that, we use a process of auditing and measurement to assess our quality, and then use the information collected to improve our performance.
Two tools that we use assess quality are audits and non-conformance records. Management reviews these records and then uses it to direct corrective action."
I would love to hear comments on this before I spend days wasting my time.